Zora 182
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Join date: May 2007
136 IQ
#1
I know, I know.. original title
well, this is pretty much the results of a simple riff I invented the other day (the intro/outro)

It's not much, and to be honest.. I don't usually compose acoustic songs (I'm more into metal/Rock) But I hope you enjoy it

and please give me your opinions on it.

-Zora 182
Attachments:
Acoustic Song Midi.zip
Acoustic Song gp5.zip
Last edited by Zora 182 at Aug 2, 2008,
dark__echoes
Registered User
Join date: Sep 2007
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#2
It's a pretty good song, kinda simple, but if you add some lyrics, it'd be a great song.
Zora 182
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Join date: May 2007
136 IQ
#3
yeah, I made it simple for my band members.
(They're not all that great, so I try to invent material to their playing levels)

We're gonna try and play it sometime this week.
Its_Rock77
Anthony Green Fanboy <3
Join date: Jul 2007
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#4
sounds nice.

way too many repeats in there but I'm sure with vocals it'll all work out. this actually made me think of fleetwood mac

but nice little riffs although pretty simple. it all fit very nicely together. It really needs a little more oomph at some parts though to really keep it interesting.

Edit: I just noticed that sounded like a slam on fleetwood mac. that statement was not in any way connected to the comment before.
...Nothing you've ever...
...Planned on ever turned out...
...The way you planned...


...You're still disappointing them...
Last edited by Its_Rock77 at Aug 3, 2008,
Zora 182
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Join date: May 2007
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#5
yeah, I'll work on it, but I'll leave it like that for now. I need to see if the band can play and memorize it.

and fleetwood mac?
never heard of it...
Its_Rock77
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Join date: Jul 2007
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#6
Quote by Zora 182

and fleetwood mac?
never heard of it...



ummmm.....er.....


I'm actually kinda at a loss for words...

you've never heard one of these songs?
http://ca.youtube.com/watch?v=5QkzNLdSp0k&feature=related
http://ca.youtube.com/watch?v=Csatmi34YEk&feature=related

I don't remember exactly which song it reminded me of. It might have actually been a Stevie Nicks song...
...Nothing you've ever...
...Planned on ever turned out...
...The way you planned...


...You're still disappointing them...
Zora 182
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Join date: May 2007
136 IQ
#7
OHHHH!!
yeah, sorry I'm bad at remembering names he he
But yeah, I heard songs from them.
(to be honest, I don't have any songs from fleetwood mac on my laptop... soon to be fixed though )
Its_Rock77
Anthony Green Fanboy <3
Join date: Jul 2007
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#8
oh, me neither. I'm not a huge fan or anything. I just know that they are very well known and I know quite a few of their songs.


but we digress.
...Nothing you've ever...
...Planned on ever turned out...
...The way you planned...


...You're still disappointing them...