#1
i wrote this one over the past couple, i just wanna know if its too sullen or depressing, put lotsa love into this i hope u enjoy!
sry its called You do It with A Smile on Your Face - first track
Last edited by -=Led_Hed=- at Aug 2, 2008,
#3
Very nice. A solid track. Fatmanman is right about your voice, keep practicing, but I was happy with it overall and it suits the track. It's no where near as sullen as I was expecting either but it flows well and has got a good vibe. Progressions worked well. Maybe try a slightly lower tempo to give it a darker feel although it's not necessary!

Feel free to check out Autumn Of Wind on my profile.

Peace!