#3
The guitar tone could've been better but I guess you're using a low-end microphone? If so, a better mic should just do the trick (lol no rhyme intended). I liked the way you used the three guitars together. Maybe add some drums and bass to complete it?

Crit mine?
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#4
The sound overall didn't do a lot for me either. I think the tone is decent, but on the recording it comes out with too much static for me, and the sound isn't real focused. What kind of setup do you have? It sounds like you're getting some room reverb in there too, which might be kind of blurring the sound. I'm not sure what you're going for though.

Nothing of mine to crit, by the way, keep rockin!