#1
so i have fixed up some of the lyrics and made a video

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4pa-MaMXGsE

t may be warm out there
but its cold as hell in here
b/c all the fires that I had lit
were put out when you decided it was time to split

I drink till i cant see
but still the memories are playing in my head
I've tried to pause, stop and rewind
but still I cant get the thoughts of you out of my mind

And now its clear
that i need out of here
because it's the only way
I will ever be free of you

i go for a walk now
I try so hard to clear you from my mind
and no matter what i do
still every thought reminds me of you

I'll bring a new girl home
but when I close my eyes she has been replaced with you
and when i wake up in the morning
everything about her just seems so boring

I'll take some train
to a place unknown
and i dont even care where
as long as it takes me far away from here

Its time for me to leave
I hope that in this new place there will be air for me to breathe
And I take a deep breath
because I look at the horizion and I do not see you

And for once im free
All those rusted chains have gone and broke off me
And now I can fly
B/c Finally your tyranny will never reign over me

because this train
took me so far away from you
and at the end
is what ive been searching for
#2
Hey fatman, thanks for reposting this correctly.
The subject matter of this song, just something to be aware of, is done by many many, so trying to find a fresh way of putting it is what one should strive for.

I liked when you said that the in the morning the new girl is just so boring. Good rhyme, too.

the main problem with this one is line rhythm. the syllables from one line to the next. is this one about killing yourself? the 'train' is 'taking a ride down the ole' sui-slide'? is 'the place unknown' like, heaven or hell or nothingness or, for ya'll catholics out there (until a few years ago, anyway) - Limbo?

it is very very cool that you made a video on this and put a link up. I wish more people would do the same. I should do the same - and I'll try when I can get my camera a new 20 dollar battery (ich bin fast obdachlos).

good effort, anyway, - and keep it up!
#3
the train is supposed to represent just some sort of medium of getting past what has been holding you back...you could look at it as a sort of suicide but i would more consider it a rebirth into a new life free from the weights and chains of the past