im just starting out in the acoustic scene and have only recorded a couple of songs but have plenty in the pipeline!
Im from the UK and my bands website is
Let me know what you think
Advice :
1. Tune the guitar properly
2. You sing waaay too low for you voice range, and thus do not hit the right notes.

but keep practicing, took me quite some time go get that stuff right.
Are You a PROG-HEAD? I am.

My Gear :

-Peavey HP Signature EX
-Fender 100H(Head) + Fender FM412 (Cab)
-GBX Custom Bug
-Dunlop Wah Pedal GCB-95
-Marshall GV-2 Plus
-Boss CS-3
-Behringer Digital Reverb DR100