sounds pretty good
My Gear:

Guitars: Jackson SL2H, Ibanez Xiphos
Pickups: DiMarzio X2n (Bridge) DiMarzio D-activator (Neck)
Amp: Fender Metalhead
Pedals: Digitech Scott Ian Black 13, BBE Sonic stomp,
MXR KFK Equalizer
Misc: Boss BR-900CD recording studio
I don't know the song, but I really like your version. The guitar is very smooth, and your voice is really great. It's emotional, but very clear and light at the same time. I love it. I wish I could say more, but there's nothing wrong here. Vocals and guitar sound amazing. Thanks for commenting on mine.