#1
I did some improv over a few simple chords, there are a number of clangers since I just sort of played this on the spot. So feel free to critique and give any sort of advice.

The song is called "Demo I"

I think it needs a good structure, like intro..build up etc...but i'm not really good with those yet. So any advice or ideas for that would be cool as well.


http://soundclick.com/share?songid=6777656
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#2
sounds pretty damn good! i wish i could help improve it or make suggestions but you're a WAY better writer than i am!
#3
^ Thanks

But I assure you, it was quite randomly made.

BTW your MP3's are pretty good, that song on your profile is really cool.


Any more ideas guys? The chord progression is the same but an intro. and middle would be cool.
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