#1
This is a song that me and my friend on here metallicafan[Larz] made, We have not finished it but i would like some help with this piece help me add some more parts,riffs,and maybe drums if it comes to that, I will deeply give a lot of credit to whoever helps me.

Edit: Had some people help me, Drums added, Plus a new section.
Attachments:
WCC V2.zip
Last edited by SinisterScythe at Aug 5, 2008,
#4
I'm adding some stuff right now.

Edit: just some random crap that doesn't sound as good as it could. sorry. but I tried.

it's so much easier to write drums/riffs for myself than for others. :/
Attachments:
Words Cannot Chime.zip
...Nothing you've ever...
...Planned on ever turned out...
...The way you planned...


...You're still disappointing them...
Last edited by Its_Rock77 at Aug 5, 2008,
#6
alright it's up. cool ideas by the way. nice acoustic riffs going on. then distortion is cool too. you're gonna have to find a better way to transition though. in my version I added a gradual tempo change (I forgot the word for that :/ ) to the 160 but when 180 hits it still feels weird.

but anyways, would you mind giving my song a crit? it would be very much appreciated.
it's on the first page.
...Nothing you've ever...
...Planned on ever turned out...
...The way you planned...


...You're still disappointing them...
#8
well thank you. glad to have helped.
...Nothing you've ever...
...Planned on ever turned out...
...The way you planned...


...You're still disappointing them...