#1
So, this was posted on Facebook by a local fourteen year old girl. Read it, suck it all in and enjoy.

This is my song...it sounds weird but it is good with a guitar
Yesterday at 9:53pm

yea i ****ing hate you...
i really ****ing hate you with your blonde hair and brown eyes
i wish i could be the girl that those eyes adore.
god damn i ****ing hate you.
all those night you put me through you lead me on just like a fool
i mite have meant something to you then but now it seems like im not even a friend,
i cant believe im singing this song about you and about me because it all seems so god damn silly.
i mean im only fourteen and i think im in love and your like my crazy drug but to tell you the truth i really dont want to give a ****.


I...I....I...THINK I REALLY ****ING HATE YOU.
but to tell you the truth i really dont.


Note how great it rhymes and how each lines rhythm is different.
#2
I think that's a Three Days Grace song.


Seriously, though, if she thinks it's music, there's probably some audience out there for it.
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#3
Dude don't bag on her.

In 10 years she's going to be praised as a poetic revolutionary. Just you wait.

...modes and scales are still useless.


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#4
A true classic.

I bet the guitar part is a continuous open E chord. xD
#6
That's your song admit it. You posted here to get some feedback.

You naughty naughty boy
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#8
I smell a record deal coming her way.
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yeah its awesome. unless you get raped, which you will, so it wont be awesome
#9
What's that? Fourteen year-old girls aren't very good songwriters?!?!?!?!?!

GET THE FUCK OUT!!!!

Really though, I couldn't write shit at fourteen. Kudos to her for trying and having the balls to post it on the internet. She'll get better.
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#12
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A true classic.

I bet the guitar part is a continuous open E chord. xD


the breakdown probably gets a little heavy with all strings.
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#13
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A true classic.

I bet the guitar part is a continuous open E chord. xD

No. There's a Dalt7 there somewhere. Yea, she's jazzy.

...modes and scales are still useless.


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#14
Lol. I don't like the song. But that's just me. The Pit will love this.:|
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#16
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she better copyright that before Nickelback get their hands on it.


haha
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#19
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No. There's a Dalt7 there somewhere. Yea, she's jazzy.

#21
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What's that? Fourteen year-old girls aren't very good songwriters?!?!?!?!?!

GET THE FUCK OUT!!!!

Really though, I couldn't write shit at fourteen. Kudos to her for trying and having the balls to post it on the internet. She'll get better.



Yeah, I guess you have some truth in that post. She is pretty brave posting that but hah the comments on it are nice atleast...so far.....
#22
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she better copyright that before Nickelback get their hands on it.

+1 lmao