#1
My God Is A Paper Tiger
My God, what’s he doin is he wasting his whole life
Giving himself the top suite at the bottom of the grave
Devoting his entire life to that one man we trust
Longer and Longer each day
Raise his kids to be just like him is that what he wanted
Isolation and deprivation is the bigger sin
I’m no god but I have my ideas on the meaning of life
Freedom to explore whatever the heart desires
Chorus
My God Is a paper tiger
Not his fault It’s his followers
So what am I gonna do about it you ask
I’m not gonna do anything cuz It’s not my problem
Verse
Lookin back on section V-8 I contradict myself
Say Freedom to explore whatever the heart desires
Well if this man wants to devote his entire life to him
That’s all right with me, That’s just alright
But a little bit of guidance is don’t you be afraid
Afraid of some man up in the sky
Live your life and do what you wanna do
don’t listen to anyone else and change that dream
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#2
cheesy as hell. "live your life and do what you wanna do / don't listen to anyone else and change that dream" made me cringe.

the syntax is inconsistent and ruins the flow. the word choice is plainly uninventinve. didactically, this is probably the most rinsed of all topics. awful, i'd say.

though it does satisfy what you want - a lyrically boring, mildly contraversial rock song.

in that sense, good work. and congrats, i'm sure hendrix would love it.
#3
So aside from the last two lines which I'll change what should i do to make it better.
80's Fender Jazzmaster
1976 Gibson L6s
Epiphone sheraton
Late 60's Univox High Flyer Custom Deluxe
Vintage fendr twin
Fuzz Face
Zakk Wylde Wah
#4
Quote by skagitup
cheesy as hell. "live your life and do what you wanna do / don't listen to anyone else and change that dream" made me cringe.

the syntax is inconsistent and ruins the flow. the word choice is plainly uninventinve. didactically, this is probably the most rinsed of all topics. awful, i'd say.

though it does satisfy what you want - a lyrically boring, mildly contraversial rock song.

in that sense, good work. and congrats, i'm sure hendrix would love it.



Hey Alex, stop acting like a prick in your crits, you've been doing so lately. Just tone it down a bit. You can still say the same things without all the brashness.