The bass tab on here for Dirty Magic by The Offspring doesn't seem entirely right. I wrote my own version of it, really only changing the chorus (because that's the only part of the tab that doesn't seem correct, as the tabber admitted), but UG declined my version for whatever reason I don't understand. Anyway, could some one help me figure out the chorus? It basically follows the guitar, so this is what I guessed by ear:

Chorus: (x3)

End Chorus:

It's not right, but the existing tab isn't either. Any help would be appreciated, cause I'm just a beginner to music and can't really hear through the distortion to know the notes to play.