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I'm new to writing lyrics...so I thought that putting some on here people could give me some advice, on where I could improve.

The first song is called "Lies"
Would you mind if I cheat you
Or stab you in the back
Would you care if I screw you?
Or leave you in the dust

I know all about your lies
You know that I will never forget
All those times you lied to me
All those times you forsaken me

I don’t need this
I don’t want this
So just take your lies
And leave me alone

No matter how hard you try
You’ll never find me coming back
To all of your painful lies
So just leave me alone

I know all about your lies
You know that I will never forget
All those times you lied to me
All those times that you forsaking me

I know about all the times that you lied to me
You think that I will forget
But I can never forget about all the times that you have forsaken me
So why don’t you try and forget

I know all about your lies
You know that I will never forget
All those times you lied to me
All those times that you forsaking me

Every time that you lie
Every time you forsaken me
I remember it all
And I want you out of my life


The second one is called "Your Empty Heart"

Can’t seem to get you off my mind
You love was a death experience
Everyone came, but none can show
The way to your empty heart

Why do you taunt me in these ways
Why do you always seem to laugh at my face
Did you ever felt the way
That I feel for you everyday

People came and people went
Time flew by when we were together
Don’t you see how happy you are
When I’m beside you

Your empty heart
Is where you’ll find me
Everything that I done
To help you through the days

You say it’s your fault
You say that I deserve so much better
What you don’t realize
Can be what brings us back together

Your empty heart
Is where you’ll find me
Everything that I done
To help you through the days

Can’t seem to get you
Can’t seem to get you
Can’t seem to get you
Off my Mind
Last edited by stewie123 at Aug 5, 2008,