#1
here is a song i started a couple nights ago. i didn't start it with a certain genre in mind, or a certain sound...things just evolved. now it is not a finished product, i am still working on it as the days go by. so expect a finished version in the next coming weeks.

um...C4C.
Attachments:
Epic thing of epicness.zip
MY MUSIC!

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#2
hey, you're off to a good start it seems. I like the melody. It goes well over the chords. and all the instruments really added to the sound. you've got room to make this song extremely epic and I hope you achieve that. I personally think you could be doin a whole lot more with the bass. this song deserves more than just root notes. I think a guitar solo would work nicely after what you have. other than that, I don't have much to crit. get this done, it's sounding good. could you crit mine? it's somewhere on the first page.
...Nothing you've ever...
...Planned on ever turned out...
...The way you planned...


...You're still disappointing them...