#1
c4c

please and thank you

Almost Nowhere

Intro:
It was just a Friday
Everyone went to go play
But we were with some friends
And we just stayed inside
He picked up his guitar and started to play a song
And within time

Verse:
Every Friday
We do the same thing as before
After camp
We decided to rock out more
And still we
Try and try again til the end

Chorus:
We got somewhere
Almost nowhere
But don’t you think that’s good enough?
We got somewhere
Almost nowhere
But that doesn’t mean we should give up

After chorus:
We put in so much time
Wasted energy left our mind
What once was a bind?
Has set free us

[Guitar solo]

Chorus:
We got somewhere
Almost nowhere
But don’t you think that’s good enough?
We got somewhere
Almost nowhere
But that doesn’t mean we should give up

Chorus:
We got somewhere
Almost nowhere
But don’t you think that’s good enough?
We got somewhere
Almost nowhere
But that doesn’t mean we should give up

Chorus:
We got somewhere
Almost nowhere
But don’t you think that’s good enough?
We got somewhere
Almost nowhere
But that doesn’t mean we should give up

After chorus:
We put in so much time
Wasted energy left our mind
What once was a bind?
Has set free us
#2
cool song about meeting and jamming! i can assume that the repetitiveness at the end of the song is just you guys rockin out the chorus repeatedly for kicks? good nonetheless!
Lyrics: Time wasted between solos.

After a mindboggling 3-hour Steve Vai concert, I had to listen to some brainless guitar playing... so I put on Nevermind...

Jesus Rocks!
#4
Quote by speedy1330
c4c

please and thank you

Almost Nowhere

Intro:
It was just a Friday
Everyone went to go play
But we were with some friends
And we just stayed insideIt may sound better if you had said " And just decided to stay" just my thoughts.
He picked up his guitar and started to play a song
And within time
I'm not sure about the last line it seems like it doesn't really go anywhere.

Verse:
Every Friday
We do the same thing as before
After camp
We decided to rock out more
And still we
Try and try again til the end
Here its pretty good but, I think the fourth line might add a lil bit i you said "rock out some more" pretty much only adding some but again just my thoughts.

Chorus:
We got somewhere
Almost nowhere
But don’t you think that’s good enough?
We got somewhere
Almost nowhere
But that doesn’t mean we should give up
I like the chorus it definitely is something that I, and probably others could relate to.

After chorus:
We put in so much time
Wasted energy left our mind
What once was a bind?
Has set free us
I also like this, probably one of my favorite stanza's in the piece.

[Guitar solo]

Chorus:
We got somewhere
Almost nowhere
But don’t you think that’s good enough?
We got somewhere
Almost nowhere
But that doesn’t mean we should give up

Chorus:
We got somewhere
Almost nowhere
But don’t you think that’s good enough?
We got somewhere
Almost nowhere
But that doesn’t mean we should give up

Chorus:
We got somewhere
Almost nowhere
But don’t you think that’s good enough?
We got somewhere
Almost nowhere
But that doesn’t mean we should give up

After chorus:
We put in so much time
Wasted energy left our mind
What once was a bind?
Has set free us


Overall I liked it. Only a few things that I think could maybe give it just that much more.
If you don't mind taking a look at mine links in my sig
#5
lol ok i get wat your saying but the part with the intro is kinda mixed up I wrote the song out of order it started with the chorus then i did the intro lol the way I did it there it flowed in my mind I didn't see that though when I finished the song