Understand though I came up with this at like 3:00 am today ... (now 4:53 am) ... so it's clearly a work-in-progress. I'm also maaaaaad tired.

Let me know what you think of it

and any suggestions would be greatly appreciated.

(the solo thing at the end is completely improvised, so be nice).


Last edited by g°®† at Aug 7, 2008,
I liked it. It got a bit repetitive after a while, but overall riff idea is cool. The solo was sweet aswell, you got real skills Build on the main riff and add some variety and it will be great.

Crit mine? Alright C4C
Crit please! ===>> Agony
C4C'd, str4ng3r. I posted it on your profile.

edit: nevermind ... I critiqued a different song. Midi files don't play on my computer for whatever reason.
I plan to add lyrics to it, which will add some variation to it and mask the redundancy.