#1
I wrote this song voer the last couple of days and recorded it today.

Any feedback on structure and content would be greatly appreciated.
Gear:

07 Gibson LP Vintage Mahogany
90-91 Fender MIJ '62 Reissue Strat
Fender Acoustic/Electric
Marshall TSL601 Combo
Crybaby Wah
Ibanez TS-9
Boss Tu-2
#2
gonna start off with some compliments...the lead guitar added depth to what would of otherwise been a very boring song
your playing was decent and you kept in time and only had a few slip ups on lead
but the progression was very bland and common...if im not mistaken it was just g and c
so i suggest u go back and maybe add a better bridge or something to change up the song
also try writing some words to the song...always adds something

crit mine?
http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=925103
#3
thanks for the input
Gear:

07 Gibson LP Vintage Mahogany
90-91 Fender MIJ '62 Reissue Strat
Fender Acoustic/Electric
Marshall TSL601 Combo
Crybaby Wah
Ibanez TS-9
Boss Tu-2