#1
Have a listen to my song Without You and let me know what you think.


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Last edited by Telecaster_AGY at Jun 20, 2016,
#2
it was pretty cool, i think i would have liked it a lot better if the chorus came earlier, and if, when it did come, it was more powerful. i think the chorus should have been less sad than the rest of the song, you know, all major chords and you start to sing about something happy. other than that, i think it got a little repetitive. now you can crit one of the songs i have on my profile.