#2
thanks for the crit!

The riff you got goin is SICK man, the harmonized lick at around :30.

I have a suggestion for a recording improvement perhaps. Sometimes in your song, i feel like when you have just the rythem panned up the middle it doesn't sound very full. What i found to be a good technique to get a more full sound is record the rythem guitar 2 seperate times, and pan one to each ear. It makes sense if you think about it, cuz its like you have 2 ears ya know? so you should record it for each ear and not just one haha.

sick song though, i loved all the riffs and cleaner parts. nice synth at the end too.
#3
Nice! I like harmony, so this is awesome. Guitar tone is sick too.
~don't finkdinkle when ur supposed to be dimpdickin~
#4
Thanks guys!

Your right shredder. But I think the song was made too be that way. I have one rhythm guitar playing the main riff. Then I have another guitar that comes in ontop of that with a harmony slightly higher on the neck. Then I have 2 guitars panned 80% in either direction playing dual harmonies on that for the end.


You have to turn this song up. So the middle sounds loud enough. THEN it will sound right. Atleast I just mixxed it to be played like that.
Last edited by Djevik at Aug 9, 2008,
#5
you can also copy the rhythm track and move it forward like 30 mili seconds and pan left n right......thickens it up a good deal......not quite like a chorus cuz that manipulates the sound a little
#7
or backwards either way......and thanks goes to volta91 he's the one who taught me that neat trick
#10
Not really... It was more of a joint project. :P

Since I'm the first to ever play it. I'd say it was an original.

Glad you liked it
#11
I agree with Djevik its an original, And its awesome to hear it played thank you Djevik your skill is great, its also nice to see that others enjoy it too.
#14
Maybe because I ran out of ideas lol
I wrote this song as the second track on an album i'm working on and at the end the guitars fade over to the next track.
#15
Thanks for the crit bestofthebox

Yeah, your right. The drums are a little low.