#1
Any Feedback on my lyrics would be appreciated. I'm still changing it as I post it here. I'm posting another called Ghosts so please give me your feedback on that too. Thank you!

Miracle Elixir

You are my miracle elixir
I contemplate you are a fixer
I bough to you your every whim
I miss your smile
I miss your love
I miss your guile
I miss your grin

The ordinariness I miss so much
When you were here we played real tough
When you were here it was never too much
When you were here we loved to touch

The ordinariness I miss so much
When you were here we loved each other
When you were here there was no other

You are my miracle elixir
I contemplate you are a fixer
I bough to you your every whim
I miss your smile
I miss your love
I miss your guile
I miss your grin

Because you are not here on earth
My identity's gone and not a mirth
There’s thanks to give and we are terse
for seventy three years of loving worth

You are my miracle elixir
I contemplate you are a fixer
I bough to you your every whim
I miss your smile
I miss your love
I miss your gile
I miss your grin
#2
it ok i guess but the rhyme at the start of the choruses seems very forced: 'You are my elixir,i contemplate you are my fixer'
Also the word ordinariness not really the best choice id definatley change that.
A couple of other things i know you probably wanted something to rhyme with smile, but i wouldnt say guile is something to miss and you might even want to say something other than i miss which just seems a little weaker i think that could also be improved.