The Flaws of Man plz

I know the reverbs a touch crazy and you might find it hard hearing the guitar. Its a simple song about ones longing desires for his friends mum. I wasnt ment to do the singing but I gave it a shot.

If youre going to crit it and leave a comment on my profile plz tell me here about it. As i didnt check my profile for a few days and didnt relise i'd missed crittin' a few other guys songs!

The vocals arnt permo, just added them into test it out. Keep listening for the epic end.