#1
hm... quite a simple song I guess, nothing special, I mainly used G and G6 for the verse and chorus... I'll probably post the chords later on so you can imagine it better...you might find it a bit shallow but I didn't feel like intelligent images at the time....just tell me what you think!

I know that I was not
given my mouth to be silent
so why can't I just talk?
so why can't I just talk?
I know you all can't be
that cruel
and violent
so why am I so blocked?
so why am I so blocked?

I'd love to yell out at the world
and then take it all back
and then take it all back

This is me, this is my life
here's my heart, here's a knife
Here's my mooncoloured brain inside out
This is my soul, this is my mind
examine it close and then push rewind,
pull me apart, leave me bare with no doubt

Read my thoughts
Read my thoughts
Read my thoughts
Read my thoughts
Read my thoughts, read my thoughts

I'd not call it a lie
but it's not true either
but how come I don't try?
how come I don't even try?
I'm running out of space
to write my words inside myself
but still my face
it's oh so blank,
so blank, my freakin face

I think of all the things I did
and all the things I didn't do
the mistakes I made are dead to me
but I can't take back my words if they're not true

Would you silently scrach off my skin
and read it out loud
and read it out loud?

This is me, this is my life
here's my heart, come on take that knife
Here's my mooncoloured brain inside out
This is my soul, this is my mind
examine it close and then push rewind,
pull me apart, leave me bare with no doubt

Read my thoughts
Read my thoughts
oh Read my thoughts
Read my thoughts
Read my thoughts, read my thoughts

C4C
#2
Thanks for the feed back on my song. Its not my sort of lyrics bit on the emo'ish lines "here's my heart, here's a knife" that really the line that does it for me, What inspired you to write this?
But all in all its really good :-D