#1
Ug needs some cheese!

http://www.myspace.com/straightonturnleft - Recordings here

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Tried to do comedy, I couldnt tell the jokes,
Tried to be a millionaire and wound up broke,
Tried to be a chef but I didnt like the taste,
Tried out religion but I couldnt keep the faith...
Only thing im good at's being with you!

Tried to be an artist I was just misunderstood,
Tried to be a doctor but i couldnt stand the blood,
Tried to be a model but I've got my limitations!
Tried to be a lookalike but I'm crap at imitations!
Only thing im good at's being with you!

Never had a path In life i drift aimlessly,
Got no career skills-blank page for a cv,
We all feel a little lost sometimes, some dont wanna be found,
I'm happy being nobody as long as you're around
Only thing im good at's being with you
“I smoke. If this bothers anyone, I suggest you look around at the world in which we live and shut your f*ckin' mouth.” RIP
Http://www.Smash-it-up.tk
#2
thats 10 times better than most stuff i see on here. i salute you!
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Gibson Les Paul Classic
Washburn D-10 Acoustic
Santos Martinez SM-650 Classical
Marshall AVT 50 Valvestate 2000
Line 6 Pod XT
Last edited by s6k at Aug 10, 2008,
#6
it was sortof a challenge for me, I tend to be quite the pessimist in my writing I wanted to see if I had the capacity to write a "love song" haha
“I smoke. If this bothers anyone, I suggest you look around at the world in which we live and shut your f*ckin' mouth.” RIP
Http://www.Smash-it-up.tk
#8
Awesome, simply awesome. Love the ending, brings together the whole piece. At first it seems comedic, but then really adds depth and emotion to it.
this one is for you.
#9
why thankyou, I have uploaded the recording onto my ug profile
“I smoke. If this bothers anyone, I suggest you look around at the world in which we live and shut your f*ckin' mouth.” RIP
Http://www.Smash-it-up.tk
#10
Quote by damn-right!
Ug needs some cheese!

http://www.myspace.com/straightonturnleft - Recordings here

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Tried to do comedy, I couldnt tell the jokes,
Tried to be a millionaire and wound up broke,
Tried to be a chef but I didnt like the taste,
Tried out religion but I couldnt keep the faith...
Only thing im good at's being with you! I really want to say "no no no, this is cliched and horrible" but dammit this is brilliant

Tried to be an artist I was just misunderstood,
Tried to be a doctor but i couldnt stand the blood, yes, a non-rhyming rhyme thingy. Love them (sorry forgot the technical term
Tried to be a model but I've got my limitations!
Tried to be a lookalike but I'm crap at imitations!
Only thing im good at's being with you! This ones even better than the first

Never had a path In lower case "i"life i drift aimlessly,
Got no career skills-blank page for a cv,
We all feel a little lost sometimes, some dont wanna be found,
I'm happy being nobody as long as you're around
Only thing im good at's being with you


Oh bravo bravo bravo! This is one of the msot witty and original pieces I've seen on here. I clicked on thinking, "oh dear, here we go again" but you blew me away. The flow of this piece is brilliant, the rhyming is brilliant and you've taken a used and abused idea and breathed life into it. Well done! take a look at mine if you want to return the favour. Cheers!
#11
Great piece, hilarious, brilliant , short and to the point. Love the first two verses

well done