#2
Ill be totally honest with you, I think it needs work. My main criticism is that the singing is out of tune in places, and some of the lyrics are wrong. Also you should work on projecting more to get more strength in your voice.

That said your tone isn't terrible, I think you could probably sound decent if you work on staying in tune and strenghtening your voice. I'd also suggest listening to the song some more, and really paying attention to the melody. :

I did this song too, if you feel like taking a listen.
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=926859
Last edited by stusa05 at Aug 11, 2008,
#3
do you know which parts stuck out most in terms of being out of tune? i know towards the end i got really out of tune. thanks for the comments
#4
Quote by stusa05
Ill be totally honest with you, I think it needs work. My main criticism is that the singing is out of tune in places, and some of the lyrics are wrong. Also you should work on projecting more to get more strength in your voice.

That said your tone isn't terrible, I think you could probably sound decent if you work on staying in tune and strenghtening your voice. I'd also suggest listening to the song some more, and really paying attention to the melody.

I did this song too, if you feel like taking a listen.
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=926859

+1 the tone of your voice is very good and you could sound alot like tom yorke, but you definitely need to work on staying in tune and singing even notes (on the long notes your voice would waver a lot). also work on gaining confidence in your singing and projecting more, your voice sounded weak in many spots.

crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=931797
#5
Sounds pretty good to me. Like some of the other guys said, towards the end at the peak of the song some notes were either flat or sharp or shaky. In live situations that might be a little bit of a problem, but in the studio, programs such as Melodyne will fix out of key notes easily, but won't fix shakyness. I would definitely work on breathing to get the long notes not to be shaky. Other than that, you have a great voice. Keep working with it to get it better.