I've only been playing a month so I needed to work on the solo...a lot.
not to be mean... but don't try to play the solo after only one month... you just can't play it... the intro wasn't bad, but you need to pratice a lot.
Thats really good if it's only after a month. You might want to wait a bit before trying the solo...

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For a month it was alright, just work on making your picking more precise to get the note cleaner, and remember to hold the fret down real good. I believe your also playing the verse wrong.
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is your guitar an RGR420EX?

No, it's an RG370DXGP4.