I really enjoyed it, I thought you did a great job! Now, for the crit. I think during the verses you should sing more pissed off, not like angry but more edgy, and put a little more emotion in it. But all in all great cover.

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Have you ever heard the acoustic version to this song? It would give you a better idea of how the guitar is supposed to sound.