#1
Kick out my feeet
Stuck in a dream
That crept into sleep

False transmissions

Self destruct- crush the moon with a one arm scissor

Fingers aching to taste your skin

Don’t waste a drop, puff that fagot; f***ed up and numb

Some misfit love

Getting my baggage

pmuj

Off the plane.-Rain falls-huant me

S h a r e a little bit of sweetness

Stare at my portrait, look beneath my bed

Kick down my


A fog, cut so deep
Evaporates. Into my
closet door

Pick up some pills
To shake off this trance
And seep back into the see.
#2
awesome song!

i only wish i knew how the song went....
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#3
uh huh...
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#4
Some cool lines, but mainly I post to say that Thrice already has a pretty well-known song by that name. I know every song title is probably taken, but when it's a unique title it really stands out that it's already kind of...taken.
#5
yea i kno mmm damn hard. i cant figure out any other line haha. mmm any idea's? i just kinda slapped that down for now caz it sounded waht this is kind of about... mm
#6
i read "transmissions" and then "one armed scissor" and couldnt take on board the rest.

homages are cool, but theres a very, very fine line between pop culture reference and blatantly stolen lyrics.
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#7
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Kick out my feeet
Stuck in a dream
That crept into sleep

False transmissions

Self destruct- crush the moon with a one arm scissor

Fingers aching to taste your skin

Don’t waste a drop, puff that fagot; f***ed up and numb

Some misfit love

Getting my baggage

pmuj

Off the plane.-Rain falls-huant me

S h a r e a little bit of sweetness

Stare at my portrait, look beneath my bed

Kick down my


A fog, cut so deep
Evaporates. Into my
closet door

Pick up some pills
To shake off this trance
And seep back into the see.


hm...Did you know there is a song by At the Drive in called "one armed scissor"?

it's interesting though. Althoguh there was almost no meaning, it still elicited a feeling from me.

crit? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=943145
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#8
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i read "transmissions" and then "one armed scissor" and couldnt take on board the rest.

homages are cool, but theres a very, very fine line between pop culture reference and blatantly stolen lyrics.


mmm ok one. iono what transmissions has to do with anything. and 2. one armed scissor is from at the drive in and it was a quarky reference. jsut thought it was a cool image. and stolen lyrics... it's a phrase. hell if i wanted to steal lyrics i might as well have copied and pasted like 20% of it.

and if you look there are a number of references. sweetnees by jimmy eat world
uhh mistfit love by queen of the stone age


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well. tat tshe point. it's not really supposed to make sence. totally. i mean your dreaming. tahts y i started with stuck in a dream i think. but w.e the idea was that iw as dreaming. so it's just a bunch of thoughts thrown together. to make it look chaotic. but htere is some order in the chaos if you look.
Last edited by hyding roses at Aug 26, 2008,