#1
Stop thinking about your future kid,
You're gonna make it all the way.
With your multi platinum albums,
Bright blonde hair and child's play,
you're a doll...

She's my girl, it aint no joke, it's all right.
Yea me and miley cyrus did coke, last night.

And don't worry about your innocence,
It's long gone kid, you just don't know.
Better drop the good girl image,
Take a hit before the show,
it'll calm you down...

The little girls are screaming your name, out the curtain you go,
You'll be doing some screaming of your own after the show.

All the glory and glamour it aint what it seems,
You're used by your parents to live out their dreams.
Gained worldwide attention by age 11,
You had access to drugs 24/7.
You exploded right onto the scene,
You'll be dead by 19.

Don't wanna listen to your albums,
rather take a bullet in my knee.
Whenever they talk about you,
I just mute the T.V.

And whenever I see your face,
In a magazine I turn the page.
You gotta stop your acting career,
and start acting your age.

Walk down the street and you see people stare,
As if they didn't see you in Vanity Fair.
The world was your showcase, and you had it all,
The whole world waited for you to fall,
and you did....

Don't let 'em get to you girl, you're a shining star,
Just sit back and pretend to play that guitar.
Last edited by islanderzfan49 at Aug 13, 2008,
#2
hahahahahahaha
thats funny
My futile existance could be summed up in one word


Derp!!!
#4
loved the 5th paragragh
My futile existance could be summed up in one word


Derp!!!
#6
With that song title, it had to be awesome to even live up to the title, and well it was and I loved it. When I was reading the song, the music goin through my head was kinda pop-punk like.

Quote by islanderzfan49


You're a teen starlet, you'll be a cheap Harlot,
doing anything you can to get back on T.V....


I love the idea but it came off kinda rough. IMO it would finish stronger with a little different wording like :

To them your a teen starlet, but you're my cheap harlot
doing anything you can to get back on T.V....

But like I said I loved it and made me laugh.
#7
I laughed at first, then I thought about it and got depressed. Everything you said is true.
#8
Dude you are a genius, this is brilliant
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#9
dude if you make make an album i'm buying it. the song sounds deep and disturbed like metallica, weird like oingo boingo, and humorous like the arrogant worms. keep writing lyrics
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#10
I didn't really like the added stanzas. I thought the piece ended perfectly with the pretend to play guitar line. Maybe move the other two stanzas up?

It was the only task I would undertake...

I P R O G
...to reap the harvest that was mine


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#11
Dude, record this. That was awesome.
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#12
lol I loved this song I could see like weird al doing it to the music of a hannah montanna song lol
#14


At the end, it sound better by calling it STD's, and it makes it sound right in the rhythm I was thinking with. But if V.D's sounds better in your rhythm keep it
#15
that's friggin hilarious...
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#16
LMAO!!!!!! I saw the thread title and I was like WTF?? cause I didn't realize it was in the lyrics section..

Awesome lyrics.. I'd definitely want to hear it if/when you record it.

the first genre that came to mind for this was poppy ska-punk
Last edited by vartanspartan at Aug 13, 2008,
#18
"You'll be doing some screaming of your own after the show"
"You exploded right onto the scene,"
"...don't worry about your innocence, It's long gone kid..."

thinly veiled pedophilia or brilliance? you be the judge.
#20
I feel sorta creepy for saying this, but I loved this part:

The little girls are screaming your name, out the curtain you go,
You'll be doing some screaming of your own after the show.


Also, great stuff.
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#21
Wotw?
ADELOS
POP PUNK
for fans of...

Motion City Soundtrack, Get Up Kids, Jimmy Eat World, Transit, Brand New, Dashboard Confessional, Early November, Fall Out Boy, Jawbreaker, Polar Bear Club, The Story So Far, the Wonder Years, Something Corporate.
#23
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Wotw?


I do believe the WotW is reserved for excellent pieces of writing, not immature jabs at your least favorite pop star with forced rhymes and half baked ideas.
#24
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I do believe the WotW is reserved for excellent pieces of writing, not immature jabs at your least favorite pop star with forced rhymes and half baked ideas.


Well I thought it was good :P


(i wasn't seriously recommending it haha)
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#25
Absolutely brilliant.

For some reason it makes me think of cobra starship possibly because the lyrics are quite arrogant. As someone already said the title gave alot to live up to and you managed it.
#27
haha bad ass
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#28
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i think its even more relavent now.


nice bump, douche.
#31
figured I'd give u number 30,
funny
and though I usually don't like "funny" writings, this was actually a clever funny, so it deserves some respect.
Congratulations, u made a popular song
#33
It's ironic and sad that this has got 31 replies and over 1000 views. Maybe, to achieve the same results, I will title my next piece "I had sex with Satan". Or something similar