#1
http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/doggy_hat/music/all/play388609

I've just recently discovered how to upload MP3's to this site. And want some crit.

How I make my Music:
I make rather abstract electronic music using a Compaq Presario my parents bought in 1999 with FL Studios 7 Demo Edition. With a stock soundcard, very minimal computer resources. My music is far from professional. So please forgive me for the poor sound quality. And for short/repetive song structures, as I can't save projects in demo software and all my songs are done in one sitting.

My favorite is Robot Dinosaur Man.

EDIT: I have plenty more songs that I'm going to be uploading tomorrow.
Last edited by doggy_hat at Aug 12, 2008,
#2
Damn, that's different, but very very cool sounding. I'm not sure what you said about how you make the music, but keep it up. It's really neat. The only thing you might wanna do is add some drums or some percussion to "Robot Dinosaur Man" to make it feel more full

Also, what is the spoken part on "When God Smiles"? I feel like I've heard it before.

Also, if it wouldn't be to much trouble, critique some of my work?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=932706
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#3
Quote by Spay
Damn, that's different, but very very cool sounding. I'm not sure what you said about how you make the music, but keep it up. It's really neat. The only thing you might wanna do is add some drums or some percussion to "Robot Dinosaur Man" to make it feel more full

Also, what is the spoken part on "When God Smiles"? I feel like I've heard it before.

Also, if it wouldn't be to much trouble, critique some of my work?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=932706

The spoken part from "When God Smiles" is sampled from a movie. I'm not sure which one though. It was just in some random sample pack I downloaded.

And I like Robot Dinsaur Man without drums to be honest. I feel like the melody is just perfect and by letting it play solo, really lets it shine the most.
#4
Dude, that sounded cool.. Very original. Keep up the good work
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