#1
I feel
Like I have
Never loved anything

Emptiness
Encompasses
Everything

I made her
Cry again
But me...
I didn’t feel a thing

The rain beats
Down on upon
A sorry windshield

Grains of salt
In the eye
Make it harsh
Make it dry

Oh I wish
How I wish
Oh I wish
I could cry
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there is a recording @ the myspace if you wanna hear it for real

http://www.myspace.com/iveonlybeenplayingforamonth
Last edited by blackmajik2021 at Aug 12, 2008,
#4
I like the lyrics on it. They're good, but listening to the song, I think you could do more with it. Its a bit annoying as you dont change a whole lot in the piano. But yes, based on the lyrics, It is very good
#5
i wanted it to be stripped down and slow and tired. in the context of the album im preparing it makes sense, its after a very fast and upbeat song. its like a cooldown.
#6
i wanted it to be stripped down and slow and tired. in the context of the album im preparing it makes sense, its after a very fast and upbeat song. its like a cooldown.