#1
hey guys!!! finally Ive decided to record my very 1st serious song, with lyrics inspired in the World of Warcraft game

Its called "The Gates of Orgrimmar", 2 mins 45 seconds

http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/Gacel/music/all/play389064

The first minute is clean with some gay singing but after that the song goes a bit more "Death Metal"

Lyrics included in my profile, hope you like it!

EDIT:

Lyrics
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Feeling the warm wind on my face
as I stand at the gates
Casters and Warriors duel around
making the Horde leader proud

Cries of war and drums I hear
Another battle has been won here
Tonight we'll eat and drink
the flesh and blood of our enemies

Enter the city
The Brothers are dead
Onyxia and Nefarian
Their heads are impaled

Orgrimmar, you're Kalimdor's glory
Orgrimmar, we'll defend your gates
Orgrimmar, you're Kalimdor's glory
Orgrimmar, we'll defend your gates

A yell like a lightning
from the Warchief's throat
pierces your brain
and fires up your heart

Orgrimmar, you're Kalimdor's glory
Orgrimmar, we'll defend your gates
Orgrimmar, you're Kalimdor's glory
Orgrimmar, we'll defend your gates

It's the rallying cry of the dragonslayer
echoing through every street
feel the urge to enter his chamber
before Thrall you shall kneel
Last edited by Gacel at Aug 16, 2008,
#3
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Is this a joke? World of Warcraft? Seriously?


seriously, check it out yourself
#4
tune please.

it sounds very out of tune to me.
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#5
Haha, it's um, ok, I mean your playing sounded pretty clean and stuff.

Do you smoke man? Haha.

You're brave.
#6
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tune please.

it sounds very out of tune to me.


well, you might be right, the guitar I have atm is utter crap and I need to retune it constantly, Im getting the esp sv standard tomorrow, but I dont think I'll re-record the song
#7
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Haha, it's um, ok, I mean your playing sounded pretty clean and stuff.

Do you smoke man? Haha.

You're brave.


hehe thanks, and no, I dont smoke, but I drink like a damn fish!!!

many bands write lyrics about The Lord of the Rings and stuff like that so I thought "why the hell not?"
#8
I like the clean stuff man, I think you have a cool sounding voice not "gay" sounding at all, with practice and better equipment it will sounds leaps better.
Some of the leads sounds like they stay away from their original scales. It works sometimes and adds a pretty original feeling to it. I have heard tons of bands doing the same thing, it's important that you know where you are going with it though so you are not taking the listener on a to far away journey lol. The heavy stuff sounds a lot like doom metal and not death metal, and the whole gritty tone really nails it. Don't know if it's intentional but it works. Check out Witchcraft for some ideas hehe. Keep it up man.
#9
Definately sounds out of tune a bit but its inspired by WOW?!?!?!? Thats awesome haha, way to stay original, youve also got some good attempts at covers up, keep it up man and thanks for the crit on my stuff!!! Maybe a magic the gathering song next? lol
#10
turn up the lead in the beginning, and your clean guitar sounds pretty out of tune

Singing isnt half bad - good job

1:38 i like the riff here

overall decent short song, room for improvement though. Keep it up!
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#11
as a fellow WoW fan, i REALLY like this <3
dude, your voice? it's really pretty.
love this
#12
Tune your guitar before playing man.
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as a fellow WoW fan, i REALLY like this <3
dude, your voice? it's really pretty.
love this


hehe well, in fact Im seriously considering writing a full album based on WoW lore, and I promise the sound will be a lot better in the next songs

stay tuned!
#15
Thanks for the crit. In your intro you should turn the lead up in the mix and the rhythm down, I can hear it but its a bit faint. The verse was a bit boring to me, I didn't like the vocals too much and nothing was really happening in that part. At 1:05 your guitar sounds completely out of tune, or that just didn't work at all. Again, the lead at around 1:38 should be turned out as it sounds a bit faint and drowned out. The riff around 2:02 is probably the best in the whole song. The solo sounded it was going alright but then you ended it abruptly, just didn't really work. Needs some work, but not that bad overall.
Last edited by Grimmy101 at Aug 20, 2008,