#1
Here's my first attempt at writing songs. I know limits of the instruments (I'm a Drummer). Please feel free to criticize. Outro now Heavier than ever. And yes I know the last two measures of the second solo are impossible. I put it in there for kicks
Last edited by Nosagi at Aug 14, 2008,
#3
you have to keep winrar open while opening the file, or it won't work. Works for me
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#5
Just realized that and it's my first one to upload, I don't know how.
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#6
Quote by Nosagi
Here's my first attempt at writing songs. I know limits of the instruments (I'm a Drummer). Please feel free to criticize. Also, How do you make it a MP3? Also, the outro is Beethoven's 9th Symphony.


To make it mp3, just goto file/export/wave then just use itunes or something like that to convert the wav to mp3.

Good song overall. But the mixing is kind of weak, it's often really hard to make out the lead parts because the rhythms are too loud. A little work with the volumes and the pan would do wonders.

I really liked the drums/bass through the entire piece.

Solos were nice too.

On the downside I did think the guitars got a little repetitive at times, especially that tapping bit before the outro.

Beethovens 9th seemed totally out of place too

Still a good solid song.
#7
No offense, but the only thing that I thought was really good in the entire song were the drums, and go figure, you're a drummer. I guess it's just not my style so I can't really say anything that I would improve.
#8
Quote by icronic
To make it mp3, just goto file/export/wave then just use itunes or something like that to convert the wav to mp3.

Good song overall. But the mixing is kind of weak, it's often really hard to make out the lead parts because the rhythms are too loud. A little work with the volumes and the pan would do wonders.

I really liked the drums/bass through the entire piece.

Solos were nice too.

On the downside I did think the guitars got a little repetitive at times, especially that tapping bit before the outro.

Beethovens 9th seemed totally out of place too

Still a good solid song.



When you said Drums/Bass, after I glanced at it I thought you were calling him a dumbass.

Anyway, can you upload the mp3?

(Or is it already in the folder?)

I'll go check.
Check out my music, if you please.
#9
it's in the folder
ya the bass harmonic and other stuff was just for effects and would never be tried in real life, Thanks for the crit. I'm rewriting the piece now. Thanks
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They bite? ****... I guess I'm gay now.
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No, nobody on The Pit watches porn.

We also don't play guitar, eat, sleep, or even go on The Pit.

Has Guitar Pro 5 and does the drums for them!