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Hello everyone!

Well, I remember I was lying on the floor at about 3am with my amp up to my ear, and I just started playing without thinking what I was doing, and suddenly I had a song in mind. So I decided to tab it out, record it, edit it, re-think some of it over, re-record it, etc. The whole process might have taken me a week. Please be honest, constructive crit is appreciated.

I made this with 2 clean guitar tracks. If anything to me, it seems Tool-ish/Bucketheadish above all else.

I played this with a Gibson Epiphone through a Roland Cube 30.

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#5
Pretty good. I definetly heard the Bucketheadness which I certainly enjoyed. During certain parts I saw the resemblance to the more filler-type Tool (like Eon Blue Apocalypse etc...).

I enjoyed it but maybe it's because Tool and Buckethead are my favourites. Either way, well done.
#6
I loved it. I think it would work perfectly for an interlude, or even a full song if you built up throughout (kind of like a Godspeed! kind of deal). It sounds like it could be on the soundtrack to 28 Days Later Seriously, great work.
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I loved it. I think it would work perfectly for an interlude, or even a full song if you built up throughout (kind of like a Godspeed! kind of deal). It sounds like it could be on the soundtrack to 28 Days Later Seriously, great work.


Awesome! It was meant as an interlude to start with. And I love 28 days later, lol.
#9
i really liked the beginning kinda had a creep feeling an it is cool when you start adding more instruments such as the lead and it gets louder. I suggest going somewhere with it. Maybe changing the rhythym to add some variety. But maybe thats not what your going for. But in my honest opinion i felt like when you started out it was going to lead up to something but it kind of didnt just soft lead. Maybe try making some sort of climax to the song. Thats my two cents...
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#10
wow...just wow i definately hear some buckethead and tool in here. I like it! well done!
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#11
sounds cool, have a good basic idea there. Would definetly add some background articulation though to fill out the sound and keep it more dynamic (I.e simple string, maybe piano, that sorta thing). Also maybe have it build up to something. But yeah, very good idea so far.
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sounds cool, have a good basic idea there. Would definetly add some background articulation though to fill out the sound and keep it more dynamic (I.e simple string, maybe piano, that sorta thing). Also maybe have it build up to something. But yeah, very good idea so far.


Well, the general consensus here is that it should build up to something, and I agree. So I will definitely look into that! I might add a background track, but it won't be guitar since I already have 2. (I don't want to pull a Dragonforce here..)
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Well, the general consensus here is that it should build up to something, and I agree. So I will definitely look into that! I might add a background track, but it won't be guitar since I already have 2. (I don't want to pull a Dragonforce here..)

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