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Hey guys this is an old song, i haven't posted it though. Just wondering if you guys have any comments, negative or otherwise. I want to improve it, i know its a little weak in terms of structuring, but im not that skilled as a writer, so any specific crits are definitely welcomed.

http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/metalman9/

or in my profile

oh ya its called falling to infinity, its just 2 guitar parts right now, i plan to add drums when i re-record a better version