#2
I thought the intro was repeated a bit too much, but thats not really a big problem. I'm not a huge fan of the vocals, but I do like the guitars riff under the vocals. I really like the guitars fill around the 1:00 minute mark which leads into the second verse I believe. The riff around 1:23 to where the vocals start is great, Slayer vibe from it for me. I think my favorite section in the whole song was around 2:30 after the vocals stop and it goes instrumental for while which leads up to the solo, some good riffs there. I think the riff after the first solo repeated a bit too much, but not a big problem. I also liked how for the second solo you had rhythm in between the leads, outros also very cool. Overall I thought it was pretty good, I wasn't a big fan of the vocals, but musically I liked it.

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#3
Nice riffs, the vocals kinda sucked though. Thrash vocals don't have to be good, but they should at least not be (too much) out of key. I thought the riff under the solo was a little too repetitive, the solo however was good. The riff after the solo was a little too repetitive also. The riff after the solo is nice too.
I thought the highlights were the riff at 1:02, the riff after and before the solo and the riff at 2:19.
Overall, a solid job and a nice thrash song, 8.5/10.

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#4
I personally liked it. The vocals were actually good I thought they just need a little work. the guitar was really sweet! Overall catchy song. Crit mine www.myspace.com/allornothingtunes
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#5
Quote by Descendent-182
I personally liked it. The vocals were actually good I thought they just need a little work. the guitar was really sweet! Overall catchy song. Crit mine www.myspace.com/allornothingtunes



I'll be the first to say that I'm not the biggest fan of Ska, but it's pretty definitely a very solid song. Pretty solid vocals. Everything was mixed so that everything can be heard. Nice chorus also, it all comes together nicely.

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