#1
A bridge! Yay!

Bridge:
Rip these visions from my head
And make them real life instead
Let your soul talk to me

Pick me up and baby, please,
Let's re-enact our fantasies
Physical anarchy

Chorus (Preying on my girlfrend love for lemons):

I've seen a million faces,
And they all look just the same
But of these million faces,
There's only one I crave
I see her in my dreams
And her name's engraved in my head
Kiss me in the rain,
Pretend it's lemon juice that's falling instead.
Last edited by Gu1tar K1d at Aug 16, 2008,
#2
interesting

lines 2 and 4 don't rhyme - not a must.

line 7 seems out of balance or misplaced

and line 8 is just down right weird.
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#3
Quote by sumfears
interesting

lines 2 and 4 don't rhyme - not a must.

line 7 seems out of balance or misplaced

and line 8 is just down right weird.

The lines fit in with my music. And I prefer the word original to wierd.
#6
Quote by Gu1tar K1d
Would it be any better if it made a connection with the person I was writing for?

And my thoughts exactly.


well as long as it has meening it works. I just dont see the meaning What is it about anyways, in regards to the person?
#7
Quote by Tubyboulin
well as long as it has meening it works. I just dont see the meaning What is it about anyways, in regards to the person?

As in we share an undenyable love for lemoney goodness.

(A bridge! *Is proud*. I'm amazed I can get words on a page).