#1
Our first successful work

These are 2 different tracks if you cant tell
The first piece 2 AM is an orchestrated piece (not too exciting but it leads into the 2nd piece well)
The 2nd piece Yield starts right where 2 AM leaves off. It then moves to a rock piece.

The lyrics for Yield are in an editing stage at the moment and will be posted

Feedback appreciated!

(This tab is pending approval for Misc Unsigned Bands, but this is more up to date because it wasnt on my computer until now and I made a few very small improvements)
Attachments:
2 AM-Yield.gp5.zip
BRIAN. SCHNEIDER.
#2
you have some great ideas started here man. these two pieces have great potential to be awesome. unfortunately, in its current state, they are utterly boring. sorry dude, but that same power chord eighth note pattern in the second song was unbearable the 20th time through.

add in some leads. mix it up. could be cool.
...Nothing you've ever...
...Planned on ever turned out...
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#3
Quote by Its_Rock77
you have some great ideas started here man. these two pieces have great potential to be awesome. unfortunately, in its current state, they are utterly boring. sorry dude, but that same power chord eighth note pattern in the second song was unbearable the 20th time through.

add in some leads. mix it up. could be cool.


Thanks man
BRIAN. SCHNEIDER.