#1
This is an original I wrote, and it's kind of new territory for me. It has progressive undertones (the 9/8 time in the verse and breakdown as well as switching between 9/8 and 11/8 in the chorus) and it is a lot heavier then most of the stuff I've written thus far, so I want to see how I did with this.

I also want to note that this is a demo, so the performances (particulary my drumming) aren't perfect and the recording quality isn't amazing, but the main things I want feedback on are the songwriting and arrangement, to see if there are things that need improving.

The song is in my profile.
#2
i'm very bad at giving feedback but i'll try.

i thought the quality of the recording was excellent. the first 2 and a half minutes were a bit dull. kinda dull and boring and needed a bit more. vocals might give it that "kick ass" factor. the solo at the end and the ending rocked my socks. overall, i liked it. v nice.