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First of all Hi
I have new song for you to qritique

here it is:

I've already stoped thinking `bout you
There's no need for me to get `round you
`cause my lust for you is gone

[Chorus]
My lust, its covered in dust
My lust in the dust
There were not so much trust
My lust covered in dust
Yeah yeah

Every memory of you hurts
And my photo album burns
`cause my lust for you is gone

[chorus]2x

Youre the one to blame for this
Dont try to get away with a kiss
No, no
It would helped you in the past
But it fled by so fast

[chorus]3x

And my lust for you gone...


Hey. why do Y only get wiews not posts????
I need to know is it any good or no.
If you look at it please coment it
Last edited by proacher at Aug 19, 2008,