#1
Wish To Curse-


I made a wish upon a star
Turned out it was a plane
I wished that i would find love
But my life never was the same
My love became my enemy
Who took my heart, and worse
She never gave it bak again
My wish became a curse


just some short poem thing...Crit?
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my last fail was breaking up with my gf.

that's going to suck for a while


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Well, not really haha!


#2
It's really good in my opinion. Yah, it's short, but it doesn't have to be long. Some good creativity too. I especially like the lines

"I made a wish upon a star
turned out it was a plane"

Good job!
#3
thanx man... i wanted it to be longer, but i couldnt think of anything else to support this stanza
Quote by cpt_pimp
my last fail was breaking up with my gf.

that's going to suck for a while


Quote by leg end
Well, not really haha!