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New song im working on please critic


Caffine and sleeping pills
are sure to end all your ills
a pep in your step to start your day
a bump to slow you from your way
(Chorus)
exchange your R.E.M
for a narcotic lullaby
im not the way i used to be
so free, in the moonlight

I tried to wake myself from this nightmare
I am afraid beyond repair
Caffine and sleeping pills are what I take
make me dream of the things i feel

I can end the night
i pray that will be ok
i know its alright
but i cant promise today
i can end the night

i know its not the way my moma raised me
i know that is not what God has sid
I know its The way you hold me
I cant be anything less
than truth at its worse

Light that cigarette
Before you start fretting it
Inhale all the smoke
before you forget
who you really are

Smile at the way you once were
Smile at the you, you once were
Smile the way you once were

You studder through another verse
you pause and curse my name
I know what you wondering
I know what your going to ask

Exchange your R.E.M
for a narcotic lullaby
im not the way i used to be
so free, in the moonlight
(End_)
Its a rough draft, actuall i improvised it over Millstone right here on the ug forum. please all advice is appreciated.
If i say im lying am i telling the truth?
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