#1
Just a Fade To Black cover. Its in my profile under MP3s so listen and comment
edgy meems only friendo :^)
#2
the tone on the lead at the start is terrible, and you made a mess of the quick part.

the tone throughout is pretty terrible actually, the playing is pretty solid in a lot of places and sloppy in others.
#3
^Correct.

Also, during the part in the verse where the power chords come in, you forgot those awesome palm mutes!
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#4
im just playing under a year and trying te learn that song. im strugling with the timing on most of the songs im learning i was wondering how to get it right ive heard the song a million times and i still cant does can you give me any tips plus i think you nailed it
#5
Quote by savage axe
im just playing under a year and trying te learn that song. im strugling with the timing on most of the songs im learning i was wondering how to get it right ive heard the song a million times and i still cant does can you give me any tips plus i think you nailed it

Just keep practicing and learn the parts until there second nature and play with the song. Playing with the song helped me a lot as you learn the arrangement and beats,tempo etc.
edgy meems only friendo :^)