#1
Yeah, rate or fix. I was bored and i though "Love at first kill" sounded like a good song name so:
Love at First Kill "Chorus"?
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You never thought you would, but you always thought you might
These visions haunt you every day, every night
overdose with drugs, grab that last pill,
yes you know it was LOVE AT FIRST KILL

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or..
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You never thought you would, but you always thought you may,
You must get her back for what she did that horrid day,
overdose with drugs, grab that last pill,
yes you know it was LOVE AT FIRST KILL!
MichaelEMJAYARE
#4
It's decent. But how dyu mean u fall in love with killing? Cause it wasn't clear 2 me at first, bt ye i think it could be gd if u get a good riff workin with it. The syllables dnt match tho, so I'd change it to something like this:

You never thought you would, but you always thought you might,
These visions haunt you every day, every day and every night,
Overdose with drugs, grab that last pill,
Yes y'know it's love, LOVE AT FIRST KILL!
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#5
The love-with-killing oart kinda spawned of the phrase "love at first sight" so i changed it too kill...i just though it sounded so damn kool
MichaelEMJAYARE