#1
GOTCHA !!!!............this aint another thread that belongs on the techniques page......i got this idea believe it or not from this message board and like 2 posts.....and im not done yet !!!!

and although it seems like im writing this like a rap song, its cause i am, and im gonna adapt to some other style later on down the line ..


My fingers begin to move, and they began to type
Like a pen and pencil on the paper when they begin to write
The words flow from, my mouth and my vocals
before i can hear the final version,its already enticed all the locals

the words are just alone, and in need of company
so i write the 1st seven alphabet, and reorganize them a harmony
What id wrote 1st didnt even matter
But the song itself even made record labels start to chatter


...........not done yet !!!!
#2
real stupid, in my opinion anyway. rap noise just doesnt appeal to me.

need to work on making lines same syllable length and stuff. look for typos and stuff too.