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Right, i've just written these lyrics for a Britpop song for my music GCSE like I was told to, i just wanted to know what everyone thought and if they could offer any improvements. Here they are:

See Past The Glass

People pass by so engulfed in their own lives,
Never take a look around to see what the world hides
Where to go, what to do
and how to make it come true

And he said
"Take a look outside of your window
At the beautiful view surroundig where you are
Broaden your mind to see past the glass
to see the world that does not revolve around you"

Theres a beautiful world out there that we live in
to not see it for its glory would be a sin
So obsessed with life and culture on TV
All they want to do is become a celebrity


And he said
"Take a look outside of your window
At the beautiful view surroundig where you are
Broaden your mind to see past the glass
to see the world that does not revolve around you"

So change your life
and start to realise
the potential that you can fulfill
all that's needed is faith and the power of will

And he said
"Take a look outside of your window
At the beautiful view surroundig where you are
Broaden your mind to see past the glass
to see the world that does not revolve around you"


Thanks UGers