#2
first of all, thanks for the in depth crit.

now: the intro chord proggression was really catchy, but at some points you're muting the notes a bit, which doesn't sound so good. this sounds like with drums and bass and such, it could be turned into a cool sounding indie peice. is this an acoustic that you're mic'ing, or an electric/line deal? i think that the tone could be a bit fuller. overall, i love your imrov peices, and i wish you would do a full band arrangement to complete my listening pleasure.
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#3
Thanks mate.

It is just a mic'd acoustic, with a 10 dollar mic and a slinky holding it in place on the desk while I play into it. I'm working on getting a fuller sound... with the recording equipment I have, its rough. Also, as to the muting... I'm working on fixing that... my fingers don't stretch .


Thanks so much for your words though. I just need a band and I'd happily give you more
#4
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Thanks mate.

It is just a mic'd acoustic, with a 10 dollar mic and a slinky holding it in place on the desk while I play into it. I'm working on getting a fuller sound... with the recording equipment I have, its rough. Also, as to the muting... I'm working on fixing that... my fingers don't stretch .


Thanks so much for your words though. I just need a band and I'd happily give you more



if i might make a mic suggestion, try the SM57...i have one and i love it very much.
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#5
You got that sound out of a $10 mic? o.O (and... a slinky ???)
1:37 sounds a bit weird to me.
I liked it. Could probably benefit from a few more instruments. Some notes are hit harder than others... almost dead notes? Overall its pretty good.

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#6
Cool chill tune, I liked it. Keep up the good work there and thanks for the crit!

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J
#7
nice acoustic improv. Good chord progressions and all. I could hear some of those parts turning into a good song for you. I liked the heavy chords right BEFORE 1:37, but like said above, the 2 chords from 1:37 to like 1:43 or something, they're a little weird to me too... anyways, i enjoyed it a lot, and hope to hear a song from it.

please check mine out
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#8
This is great man.. Love it.
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