that was pretty cool, I've never really heard a song like that.

i like the intro, it very entertaining.
bars 17-18 would flow better if there were drum fills.
the chorus has a lot of potential for vocals.
the clean bridge would sound better if there were sweeps behind the clean guitar because its the same chords just different timing.
the guitar solo could have been longer.
the outro was perfect! i loved it! the time change made it happen.

excellent job. give you a 8.5/10, work on that vocal line!

crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=940223
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