#1
Well, I write these short little stories for this health fad group in my town. They basically try and get kids to get active rather than sit at home and play Halo. Which is ironic, since I'm not very active.

Anyway, they get me to write these fictitious stories on things that are very possible from not being active, staying clean, or not eating healthy, etc. I've written one so far, which has worked, it was about vitamin deficiency (which is in my profile if anyone wants to read it), and it freaked some kids out.

I want to do one on not brushing teeth, and drinking too much soft drinks. However, I don't want it to be like the millions of other stories like "your teeth will fall out." I want it to be really extreme, but still in the realm of possibility. However, I really don't know much other than your teeth falling out. I was thinking of something like your bleeding gums getting some kind of infection, but I'm not sure.

Any ideas?
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#2
You could always write about the horrible root canals and rotting teeth that cause pain on a constant basis. That should scare some kids.
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#4
your teeth can get infected and you can get more than 6 teeth pulled in one visit to the dentist
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You could always write about the horrible root canals and rotting teeth that cause pain on a constant basis. That should scare some kids.


A root canal can scare anyone. :/
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#6
If you drink too many soft drinks it not only ruins your teeth but it screws up your body too. My housemate drinks about 10 cans of coke a day, he now has to pay £450 for dental work and he's dependent on the caffeine.

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Have batman involved in some way
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#8
I drink tons of pepsi, brush twice a day and have teeth whiter than your man juice.

I also play lots of Halo and I'm still skinny and fit.
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#9
Tell the story if little Timmy cartwright, the coke addict who's soft drink addictions land him in with Coke dealers, Al-Qaeda and eventually the police.
He is locked away for life for a crime he didn't commit where he is brutally raped, sodomized and mentally scarred.
He is moved to a mental institute where he lives to a miserable old age, pissing his pants every morning and having someone feed him lunch through a straw, while he has to watch every single one of his teeth drop out before his eyes, helpless and delusional, suffering in silence.

He hangs himself with his own necktie.
#10
just show em the big book of british smiles
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#14
scurvey?

or say that not brushing your teeth gives you super aids
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Re-write Go Ask Alice, except with candy.
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