#2
Wow you have a lot of guitars.

Anyway, on with the crit:

I really like the melody at the beggining. Good use of of 7/4 time. It's very mellow and calm. The distorted guitar tone is a little lacking though, in my opinion. I like the little bass fill thing at 0:35 that was sweet.

I think you should harmonize that distorted guitar to spice it up a bit.

I LOVE 1:02 that's just beautiful.

All the parts work really well together.

All in all this was a pretty good song and there's not much room for improvement. It did get a little boring at times however. Good job 9/10.

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#3
This sound more classical than jazz really. Frankly, I don't recognise any elements from jazz whereas the classical influence is evident. That being said, this is a quality track. Good playing, but I think this is lacking some nice compression/EQ, so in your future recordings pay attention to the mastering.

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#4
Thanks for the great feedback guys, keep it coming! I'll definitely keep working on that lead guitar sound. I ran the bass and the backup guitar through Amplitube, but I mic'd the lead guitar, which is the part that I'm still trying to figure out. I'm getting better at it, but I'm wondering if I should just do all the tracks in Amplitube. Oh, and PinkIsCool, it's actually 7/8, not 7/4.