I like the post-hardcore genre and scene, but I'm going to have to say your stuff didn't appeal to me. It was boring, but then again, I love technical guitar work. Maybe that's it.

Oh well. I'm just saying I don't like it, but I'm sure there will be people who do.
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Pretty good stuff, but how old is your bassist? He looks like he's 50

Pretty much my thoughts exactly.

Vocals need some work but that's usually something that comes with time and practice anyways.