#1
All Hope Is Gone


Verse 1:

Can You Feel The World,
It Rests On Your Shoulders.
Can You See The World,
It's A Place Of Destruction.
Can You Hear The Sounds,
Of This Brutal Place?
Take A Good Hard Look At This World,
For The Last Time!

Chorus 1:

The World Is Crashing (Burning Down),
And You Wonder Why This Is (Why This Is).
Here, Hell Is Already Found (Already Found),
We're All In This Sick Twist (Sick Twist)

Bridge:

There's Not much Longer,
The World Ceases To Exist.
Don't Try To Run And Hide,
This Is The End!!!!
(Never Again x4)

Verse 2:

Can You Feel The Time,
It's Running Out.
Can You See This World,
It's A Damning Sight.
Can You Hear The Sounds,
Of This Twisted Place.
Take A Good Hard Look At This World,
For The Last Time!

Chorus 2:

The World Is Crashing (Burning Down),
And You Wonder Why This Is (Why This Is).
Here, Hell Is Already Found (Already Found),
We're All In This Sick Twist (Sick Twist).
Now Look To The Sky (The Sky),
And Realise We're Going To Die (Die!).
Take A Good Hard Look At This World,
For The Last Time!

Bridge:

There's Not Much Longer,
The World Ceases To Exist.
Don't Try To Run And Hide,
This Is The End!!!!!
(Never Again! X4)

Interlude:

All Hope Is Slipping Away...
(All Hope Is Slipping Away...)
Slipping Through My Fingers...
(Slipping Through My Fingers...)
All Hope Is Gone........

Bridge:

There's Not Much Longer,
The World Ceases To Exist.
Don't Try To Run And Hide,
This Is The End!!!!!!!
(Never Again!!!!! X4)

Outro:

All Hope Is Slipping Away...
(All Hope Is Slipping Away...)
Slipping Through My Fingers...
(Slipping Through My Fingers...)
These Are Our Last Moments Alive...
(These Are Our Last Moments Alive...)
All Hope Is Gone..........................


This is my first full lyrics and I'm hoping to get something going guitar wise
Last edited by Syn_a7x at Aug 23, 2008,
#2
Ah I thought some stupid person had gone and posted SlipKnoT lyrics as their own, lol. Cool lyrics, but a song isn't meant to sound like a story. Try to get some sort of difference in there

-Static
#3
Cool hehe, I haven't even heard slipknot's all hope is gone song. I've heard Phsychosocial and that ACE.

Ok I'll work on that
#4
Why isn't it meant to sound like a story thinik of it songwriting is a creative outlet so if he wants it too sound like a bit of a story it's pretty good idea.

I'd say 8.5/10 it's pretty damn good IMO
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#5
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Why isn't it meant to sound like a story thinik of it songwriting is a creative outlet so if he wants it too sound like a bit of a story it's pretty good idea.

I'd say 8.5/10 it's pretty damn good IMO


I'm just saying. You don't hear that many songs that flow like a story. The verses are usually quite different from each other and the choruses are usually the same, or very similar.
#6
I Actually didn't think of a storyline, I just wrote lines and thought to myself, "Right, does this line work well with this line?" I did have a general idea but it was like a big blur of the world ending and it was because of someone's Sins
#7
Quote by Syn_a7x
I Actually didn't think of a storyline, I just wrote lines and thought to myself, "Right, does this line work well with this line?" I did have a general idea but it was like a big blur of the world ending and it was because of someone's Sins


Nice nice. Is it just me or is the first line of a song always really hard, but once you have that, you can write it in minutes flat?
#8
Yeah It was Hard for me, So I stuck some music on and BFMV's 'Eye Of The Storm' came on and the first line it says is 'Can you see the thunder? can you feel the rain it pours'

thats when I wrote the first line of the whole song which is:

Can you feel the world

From there on it evolved
#9
I think one thing that helps me get feedback for this song is that the song name is the same as one of slipknots highly acclaimed songs
#10
Quote by Syn_a7x
I think one thing that helps me get feedback for this song is that the song name is the same as one of slipknots highly acclaimed songs


I suppose that helps
They made me do push ups in drag

I'm gonna have a really hard time if we're both cannibals and racists.

Don't dress as a whore, he'll thump you.

I'm a firework, primed to go off